Peer Review

 Only April 5th I had my friend Abril Porcile peer review my movie. I choose Abril to look over my movie because of how honest she is. She will be so straight forward on how I can make my movie better. I showed it to her at lunch because it was easier for me to understand her critiques in person. She told me that my font was too big and the color I used was too dark so it was hard to see in some clips. She said that my movie was a little choppy and that I shouldn't add any transitions because you hardly see continous transitions in a movie. The transition and choppiness  part I agreed with because after our reshoot it was kinda hard to make everything flow again. This was because our new clip was much longer than the previous one. Since this clip was so long we had to cut some parts out of our other clips. This completely messed up our video. Words and actions of the other clips were cut out because of this scene. I sent it straight over to Alyssa and she made a miracle happen. She was a little mad that I messed our video up this much but she was able to fix it. She cut part of the beginning of the re-filmed clip cut it down to the most important part. This gave us a spare 35 seconds which we used to fix our original scenes. Thanks to Alyssa our movie met all the requirements and it didn't look choppy. The next thing I did was correct the color and size of the titles of my scene. I made them a little smaller, the size being 25 instated of 30. I then  fixed the color. Instead of dark red, I did a light red that was almost a blood color. I really trust Abril's edits because she has taken two years of journalism and knows exactly what to look for when perfecting a project.